Saturday, April 9, 2016
Words Like Fire
I'm a bit slow at things. Finally got around to watching Chariots of Fire (1981) last night. I mean, it's only been 35 years since it was released. And in spite of all the cliches, it deserved every award it received, and more. Here was an example of fine acting, directing, and writing.
I wrote the other day about Batman v Superman: Dawn of Justice and how, even though we had godlike beings, and a classically mythological tale, it didn't work because of editing. Please refer to my post on B v S: http://writefromthegitgo.blogspot.com/2016/04/a-few-scenes-shouldve-hit-cutting-room.html
With Chariots, we had young men who wrestled with the gods, each with his own reason for striving to be the best, the fastest. The writing was tight, no dead spots, but they paced it to allow the story to breathe. And the music. In B v S they felt they needed to pummel us with walls of sound so we knew we were watching Titans battle. In Chariots the music was there for punctuation. From the story and the actors we knew we were watching young Titans contending.
If you're writing a story of a mythological nature, I can think of no better example to study than Chariots of Fire. Then you'll have words like fire.
Keep writing, friends.